tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post8142229107439618021..comments2023-08-21T08:37:17.646+01:00Comments on Tessa's Blurb: Mash it up for the Blogfest!Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-68976321689544872872010-10-05T18:13:42.591+01:002010-10-05T18:13:42.591+01:00I totally loved this! I loved how she couldn't...I totally loved this! I loved how she couldn't be near saltwater - I thought that was an excellent detail. Really fun to read!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-52897289182295869412010-10-05T15:49:17.430+01:002010-10-05T15:49:17.430+01:00A mermaid detective! How cool is that?A mermaid detective! How cool is that?J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-55963452497842814652010-10-04T15:44:58.197+01:002010-10-04T15:44:58.197+01:00usually i'm not a fan of either detective stor...usually i'm not a fan of either detective stories or mermaid stuff... but jiminey cricket tessa! this was really interesting and left me wanting to read more! it should totally be worked into a bigger story- like a novel or something! :)vic caswell https://www.blogger.com/profile/01218698236837610704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-69595224692842681252010-10-02T03:48:00.706+01:002010-10-02T03:48:00.706+01:00Good job, Tessa. I would love to read more about y...Good job, Tessa. I would love to read more about your detective.<br /><br />Props for being able to do three blogfests in 48 hours!Lisa Pottshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11676087488599338569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-22401348823947297042010-10-02T00:02:55.068+01:002010-10-02T00:02:55.068+01:00I was thinking how dumb I was and that I was not g...I was thinking how dumb I was and that I was not getting this right. I was glad the comments were there for me to read. Okay I guess I was getting it okay. These mash ups are kind of weird, but it's an interesting exercise for the brain. And then I saw that there were length rules--mine went over by a little bit. <br /><br />Good job -- I'd like to read your crime writing that was justArlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-39374392810741291602010-10-01T23:36:10.346+01:002010-10-01T23:36:10.346+01:00Great mash up of unlikely monsters!Great mash up of unlikely monsters!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-38157693317333283872010-10-01T23:23:20.038+01:002010-10-01T23:23:20.038+01:00Love it - I can just see Mia getting into all sort...Love it - I can just see Mia getting into all sorts of trouble! I love the dog's name too. nice job.Elena Solodowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03037029195682225565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-54373113001096592032010-10-01T22:23:33.453+01:002010-10-01T22:23:33.453+01:00Tessa, Great! Loved it! I'm not participating ...Tessa, Great! Loved it! I'm not participating in this fest, but I'm reading some during breaks. Mermaid detective--a whole lot of awesome!Brenda Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263237745979525170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-12062720412644096892010-10-01T17:12:08.520+01:002010-10-01T17:12:08.520+01:00Hi Tessa! I've been here :D Thanks for partici...Hi Tessa! I've been here :D Thanks for participating!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17034419617457525778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-42516489969414675252010-10-01T15:23:38.840+01:002010-10-01T15:23:38.840+01:00Wow! What a cool story! You have me seriously wo...Wow! What a cool story! You have me seriously wondering just what kind of creature this murderer is! And mermaid detective? You can't beat that. :DEmily Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06478461123707071108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-12649485097728103582010-10-01T13:49:31.009+01:002010-10-01T13:49:31.009+01:00@Donna: *blushes* aww thank you so much! You made ...@Donna: *blushes* aww thank you so much! You made my day, you totally did!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-46360763599144997572010-10-01T07:12:01.546+01:002010-10-01T07:12:01.546+01:00Oh,Tessa; that was excellent.
I didn't know a...Oh,Tessa; that was excellent.<br /><br />I didn't know about this blogfest, but I doubt I could have participated. The criteria is so - unuaual.<br /><br />You really pulled this off. Murder mystery with fantasy (or paranormal if you prefer.)<br /><br />Wow. Yes, I liked this detective, and her introduction as a mermaid, and the hint that the dog is not a dog but a shell fish of some sort.dolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-14923628842490383562010-10-01T01:59:29.618+01:002010-10-01T01:59:29.618+01:00How fun!!! I love!!! What a super fun blog fest! I...How fun!!! I love!!! What a super fun blog fest! I'm actually participating in another one or I would have joined in, but your piece was great!!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667521490706435608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-82205347395463478782010-09-30T22:43:53.196+01:002010-09-30T22:43:53.196+01:00Cool, thanx for pointing it out!Cool, thanx for pointing it out!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-55582519870316416632010-09-30T22:30:43.736+01:002010-09-30T22:30:43.736+01:00Much better!Much better!Mara Nashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14628961488068784772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-32472142519149435452010-09-30T22:18:50.107+01:002010-09-30T22:18:50.107+01:00Hehe now I've added a line or two to make it l...Hehe now I've added a line or two to make it less cryptic... whatcha think?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-29540080475124042862010-09-30T21:19:05.644+01:002010-09-30T21:19:05.644+01:00LOL apparently I'm having a cryptic day today!...LOL apparently I'm having a cryptic day today! Yep she's a mermaid, and no, it's not a WIP (yet) just one of those ideas floating around...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8612140521084302156.post-39799377748356090792010-09-30T21:16:31.796+01:002010-09-30T21:16:31.796+01:00Hey there! Am I right in guessing it's paranor...Hey there! Am I right in guessing it's paranormal/detective mashup? Is Jones a mermaid? If so, I think you could even add more hints or just come out and say it. It was almost too cryptic.<br /><br />But I liked the scene overall. And I'm intrigued where she came from, how and why she became a detective, and if she finds the murderer.<br /><br />Is this part of a WIP you're working on?Mara Nashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14628961488068784772noreply@blogger.com